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Ridge Invitational Round 1 [East Side EV v. Lakeland
VS]
Overview of the
Round----------------------------------------------------
Aff was mass transit
1NC-gentrification
disad, fiscal cliff disad and case defense
Speech
by speech comments----------------------------------------------
1AC- Brianna you did a
wonderful job saying ‘and’ in between cards to distinguish them for me! NOTE:
Try to read your 1AC a couple more times—you seem to be stumbling on several
words~
1NC- Learn how to give a roadmap! Also try to be more organized during
your 1NC.
2AC- you said that racism must be prioritized, but you didn’t extend
warrants as to WHY they should be prioritized. Additionally, take the advice I
gave Brianna—re-read your cards a couple of times over—you also seemed to be
stumbling on words. Overall—you did a great job extending your aff! Good job!
2NC- I liked your overview of the fiscal cliff disad at the top of the
2NC but I think that that analysis should be present on other flows.
Miguel (during 2NC
CX)- I thought you did a fantastic job trying to
piece apart the link to their fiscal cliff disad! great questioning!
1NR- try to split up the neg block! Great analysis on the disad—note
that this same analysis was done in the 2NC as well.
RFD-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
I
voted affirmative. I thought that the affirmative did a much better job framing
how racism would come first and how the probability of nuclear war is just too
low to be compared to. Also, I have a clear extension of the ‘mass transit
would solve the economy and create jobs’ argument so I am persuaded to vote
aff.
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